Nov
06

Eyes poem

Filed Under (English) by on November 6, 2013 and tagged ,

Big. small. fat. sharp. all colours. thin. white. black. teary. wet. untouchable. Eyes move for us, without them we wouldn’t be able to see. eyes blink and shudder. They see in the dark.  Small as rats, strong as baseball bats. Gleaming and glancing like sharks in the night swimming through the sea.

 



6 Responses to “Eyes poem”

  1.   Oli Says:

    Nice poem Will I really like it.

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  2.   Ms D Says:

    Hi Will, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I especially liked the last line “Gleaming and glancing like sharks in the night swimming through the sea.” That’s a lovely image.

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  3.   Brodie Says:

    Hi Will, the eye poem is it based on the game Eyes?

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  4.   ips15andrew Says:

    Nice one Will.

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  5.   will Says:

    no brodie

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  6.   ips15dakota Says:

    It is a really good poem, William!:)

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